So for writing this week we focused on complex, compound and simple sentences. We got to write a short narrative, and had to include some of the complex, compound and simple sentences. We had to base our narratives off of a prompt we were given, which looks like this
I will now give you some of my complex, compound and simple sentences
Complex:
1. The shark swims away because of the amount of impact, and Kimmi relaxes, laughing.
2. Kimmi curls up in a ball right next to me, because of the cold, still shivering her little heart out.
Compound:
1. I watch her bolt towards me, her feet hitting the soft ground hard, causing sand to fly up.
2. I say slowly, stopping dead in my tracks, looking down at the water which is slowly starting to climb higher up the rock, as the tide comes in
Simple:
1. I don’t feel any guilt for shoving Rose in the water after Kimmi.
2. I guess I’m on the run now.
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